Mayapur at 19:25, 3 March 2012

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<span class="link">[[Vanisource:Letter to Pradyumna -- Los Angeles 20 April, 1970|Letter to Pradyumna -- Los Angeles 20 April, 1970]]: </span><div style="display: inline;" class="text"><p style="display: inline;">I have just received the blueprint copy of KRSNA, the Reservoir of Pleasure and I have begun to read it through. But I notice that there are some points you should correct before the final printing. I have already noted you the injunction that you should change the pretipadika artha to first case ending instead. Sannyasin should be printed Sannyasi, etc. So please correct these.</p>
<p>Another point is that there are some errors in the English also. On page 2 it should read ". . . decided to kill his sister, Devaki." but it has become sisters, plural. Then, what does it mean?: "The Lord's compromise was that He had Vasudeva propose . . ." This does not seem to be very clear or at least it is very awkward expression. So please see that the editors make a very careful final proofreading before printing the final copies.</p>
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Mayapur at 19:25, 3 March 2012

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